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是次範文出自2017 DSE English Paper 2 Part A 5** 42/42
2017 DSE English Paper 2 Part A 題目
You are the chairperson of the Social Service Club in your school. The school would like to develop closer links with the community. Write a letter to your principal, Ms Lee, proposing a new community project that the school can carry out with a home for the elderly in your district.
In your letter persuade your principal to accept your project by
- describing one activity that could be carried out, and
- identifying the benefits for the elderly home.
Sign your letter Chris Wong.
Paragraph 1 引言
寫作目的
I am writing to propose a new community project that we can co-organize with a home for the elderly in our district.
交代背景
As the chairperson of the Social Service Club, I understand the significance of developing closer bonds with the community, which is not only beneficial to our students but also our society.
開啟下文
In line with the school’s mission, the details of the project will be as follows.
Paragraph 2 活動介紹
標題句
The project will include a series of activities in which our students will become volunteers.
建議詳情
One of the featured activities in the project is called the “Handicraft Festival”. Our committee members will pick some handicraft items for the elderly to try out, ranging from origami to rainbow bottles, under the guidance of our volunteers. The elderly could keep their finished products after the tutorial session so as to decorate their living space and beautify it. In order to minimize the impacts on our students’ studies, it is recommended that the activity should be held on Saturday afternoons after the end of the final examination.
Paragraph 3 活動好處1
標題句
The project could bring an array of benefits for the elderly home. Firstly, it can help the elderly become connected with the community, which can bring merriment to them.
背景
Senior citizens residing in elderly homes are often isolated from the community, feeling bored and having nothing to do in their daily life.
詳細解釋論點
Yet, with our kind-hearted volunteers visiting them and providing them with warmth, the elderly can chat with us and have fun during the tutorial sessions. Knowing more about the pastimes of the new generation and the latest news in our society, they can also share with us their stories in the past and valuable life experiences.
總結句
Not only does this add spice to the dreary life of senior citizens, this is conducive to building their sense of belonging to the community.
Paragraph 4 活動好處2
標題句
Besides, the tutorials will also be beneficial in keeping the minds of the elderly active.
背景
Due to the aging, most senior citizens suffer from chronic diseases like dementia and Parkinson’s disease. According to some research, frequent participation in activities can keep the mind of the aged active, slowing their degeneration process.
詳細解釋論點
In our new project, the elderly can try to make different handicrafts in our tutorials, which involve coordination of the body as well as problem-solving processes. In the course of making origami and rainbow bottles, the senior citizens living in the elderly will have to overcome various challenges and cooperate with their teammates and our volunteers.
總結句
Through completing the tutorial sessions can they energize their mind and gain a sense of satisfaction.
Paragraph 5 活動好處3
標題句
Lastly, the project can alleviate the burden of the staff working in the elderly home.
背景
As mentioned above, many senior citizens are plagued by brain degeneration. Also, some of them have low mobility, requiring the intensive care by staff members. Hence, it is difficult for them to arrange activities for the elderly.
詳細解釋論點
With our volunteers’ participation, we can help out in organizing the events and providing guidance to the elderly. This can help reduce the heavy workload of the staff members.
Paragraph 6 活動好處3
期望建議得到採納
With the above benefits, we believe that our community project can allow our school to develop closer links with the elderly home, and most importantly, make the life of senior citizens living there more fruitful. We would be grateful if you could accept our proposal.